Drafts

In the creation of my magazine my front cover my draft looked to eclectic however i then proceeded on to make my drafts of my contents and double page spread, my first draft contents is as follows
I decided to not choose this to be my final contents as i didn't like the white background and the writing on the contents were different colours, fonts and sizes and made the magazine look very amateur and not professiona. However i did like the arrangements of my contents so decided to keep this for when i edit the contents to be my final.
The same goes for my double page apread i did not like the white background and the "Outrageous" logo seemed to be out of place on the contents therefore i decided for my final i would put the logo in the left hand corner so the audience can clearly see it. I would also use more brighter colours for the writing as the double page spread seems to dull with rthe black, white and brown contrast.